Wednesday, March 11, 2009
Friend Prompt
Helpful,beneficial,serviciable,wholesome,good,providing help for people for example your friends. I am a helpful friend because I help my friends when they need help. If someone needs my help I help them no matter what it is. I like being helpful because it makes yours friend happy and it makes you happy. It describes me as a friend because you help them when they need help and it makes them happy. It's better being helpful then not helping at all because who else will help them if you don't help them they'll always be sad and you don't want a sad friend.That is why I am a helpful,beneficial,serviciable,wholesome,good friend.
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3 comments:
I enjoyed reading your story. It really helps me get an image in my head about what you are talking about. You should try adding some more examples so you can support your details. Other then that I think you are good. Good work, keep it up!
I really like your story I just think it need alittle more examples or explaination that can support your details...Also I am not trying to be mean but you need to change some words....and not use the same thing twice....like when you said they make you happy and they are happy you kinda said it twice....But over all it was pretty good...
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